Very Nice. Wich was made first, music or Video?

You'll need to learn some things in Music. Read, Listen all kind of music, train your hear, your feels. Because, without the " Beat ", everything is wrong. Nothing fits. There is some good ideas anyway, but you need to work on the composition, harmony, evolution of the song and the structure. Then you will be able to work on the " computer " part.

Keep at it, you can do it! ;)

A Great Song. Really. Very Good arrangements and I know what I'm saying. Respect.